The sunken ship
The Sunken ShipDeep below the surfaceblind to human eyesrests the wreck of the San Juanon the reef she lies.All her crew have perishedand her treasures lostfamilies who cherishedweep the useless...
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love the flow here, davie ... and a sad story well told in this. vivid images and your closing really drives home the feeling of loss for the splendor that once was. very nice!Can't keep my eyes from...
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Hello Beth - thank you for being generous as ever! I'm glad you liked it; it was originally one for a competition, but it seemed to drift away from the subject!Davie
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This is awesome. I like the part about the figurehead. They were supposed to bring luck, but didn't always.
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I enjoyed this very much, davie - I too liked the ending, it makes the poem for me."A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the thought and...
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solid.unhurried.confident.effective.purposeful.impressive.great work.Ben.
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Steve, Valoe, Ben - thank you for your comments - I'm very glad you liked it!Davie
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Every ship has a tale to tell...and this one is no exception...good to see it brought to life again... Every new beginning comes fromsome other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The...
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